Keven11Twenty7's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chaos High 2 p2]

Suspensful!

Through the whole series you've kept me on the edge of my chair.

What power you have brought to me, what excitment! You look like you've been working hard on this. I have to say, you have some great comedy going on there. The animation isn't perfect, but it's really not about that.

This is a really good idea, and as I was watching it I felt as if it was part of a TV series. Something probably much better than Sonic X. :)

Dude really keep making these. You are making a lot of peoples day by doing this. You have turned my day from upsettingly depressed, into one laughing after another.

Good luck on Chaos High 3. I will be looking forward to it.

jbarkley123 responds:

Thanks alot! I'm glad someone understands that it's not all about the animation. I was aiming for humor! I'm glad you liked it.

[Chaos High (no intro)]

Hahaha! Very good.

It was better than imagined. It had some little problems with it, but overall it was great.

It actually felt like something some Network made up. It is a very good idea, and I hope you have great success with it.

[Yoshi's Ball Ep.3]

A nice little addition to your series.

It wasn't bad. It needs a little more work here and there, but overall I see some work put into it. But try to make them a little longer. You're doing a great job, just keep practicing.

[Baby Baboon]

Great

What a nice catchy song. I hope to see more from you.

[Charcoalmation]

Really clever

I have never heard of Charcoalmation before. Anyway I saw a lot of effort put into this, and I respect that. Keep it up, I hope to see more from you.

[Love lost, love found.]

Emotional

This is a very mood inducing flash. I felt a sort of emptyness inside me while watching. The best flashes are the ones that actually get you to feel the mood that sets in the animation.

Nice work.

Mekka23 responds:

Thank you, since i've been working on this for so long on and off the feeling has been kinda lacking but now that i've put it up i can see it in a new light. Thanks again

[SWAT parody]

Wow

The animation was suprisingly good. And your choice of music really fits this flash.
In fact I chuckled. I think you might have something there.

Well anyway great flash, and best of luck on future submissions.

[mm ok]

Well at least the song was good.

Sweet Child of Mine is a pretty good song. But your flash is just a... smiling happy face? With a loop of colours. Not anything special.

You could have at least added some more pictures. Maybe other expressions? I would rate at least a 2 if you had put that in there.

But really I know you can do better.

[Emerald Steath part 2]

Another addition to your series.

I enjoy watching your sprite animations. There not that bad. A lot better than some of the stuff that comes out of the portal. This one was a little on the short side, you could have probably lenghthened the animation.

But it was good nontheless.

[Meric&ChilcoRidetheBus.01]

Well...

It's good for a first. But... It's not in sync. What you should focus on is not haveing the syncing down yet, but actually haveing some more frames. I mean it's just picture by picture with some voices. Work on having them move. Everything else like th background (Bus) was pretty good. The characters were also drawn pretty well. The problem is, is that you need to put some more time and effort in this.

Overall I think it's ok for a first. But spend more time with your flash. Get the syncing down, maybe put mood in the voices. Make it seem like the are really talking to each other. LIke an acutal conversation. (I'm not saying you don't have that down.)

Long review short, take time in your submissions.

garythetramp responds:

Yeah, I had issues syncing the sound. Didn't know how to do it yet. I exported it with the audio waaay out of sync for it to come out slightly in sync...but I believe i've figured it out and fixed it in the second episode.
movement wise, i was doing more of a style thing, like Tom Goes to the Mayor or The Professor Brothers, but I see what you're saying. I think slowly but surly i'll make them move more and more. Thanks for the advice!