Keven11Twenty7's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ultimate Emerald Advent]

Hey not bad.

For a first sprite film there could be a lot of improvment. I feel great potential in your movie. But! I feel as if it was connected to Super Mario Bros Z in ways. I suggest a different idea. One only having to do with either Mario, or Sonic.

Although sprite movies don't really scream talent, when done right they can be the shit. (Good)
Fluent well ploted sprite animations are what get the score. Slideshows isn't that impressive. I would love to see full motion from you. Instead of having them in one position going to the next. Have them going frame-by-frame. It might be a bit of work, but it pays off in the end.

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The beginning music... Well, I would just have to say it's not the best choice. It really doesn't match the flash much. A simple little beat for the title screen is always a good idea.
Also the text should be improved.

It was short, and that's what you should focus on most. Making a longer video would help out dearly.

For right now that's all I can advise. But if you would like to know more, don't hesitate to PM me. I am always glad to help anyone in need of anything.

jskecorp responds:

I know its like super mario bros Z that was my inspiration. I suck at animating thats why its a slide show so next episode will rock because animation will get better thanx.

[Jerry: The End]

Couldn't take it.

With every episode, there fits anoher piece in the puzzle. I couldn't help but cry on this last one. I honestly don't know why. Whether it was putting the final piece in to where everything is clear, or that it was the end of all the beautiful episodes you made through the years.
I find myself tearing up at the end of each "Jerry" episode you make. There so emotional in serveral ways. Maybe the fact that his life is almost as similar as my makes me feel a bit of myself in him.

Although I am sad you ended the series, I feel it was a great decision you made. Ending it there has the most effect on your fans.
I loved each and every one of them. Sorry for saying a bit much on how I love the series. I just wanted to get that out.

Thanks for making Jerry.

[A little story]

Aww...

I couldn't help but start to tear up. I was like that at one point. So it kind of means something to me.
Well done, really. The animation was good and had a nice touch to it. The sounds were ok, and the song was well fitting. Although I bet there is something else that would fit this better, but good choice.

Not much to say, but I liked it. Keep on animating, I would love to see more from you.

Cab00se53 responds:

I really appreciate that. I'm glad I was able to touch you, and I'm glad you liked the animation. I will be sure to do more in the near future! Thanks so much :D

[There she is!!!]

A great story.

What a nice touch and effect it has on the rest of the episodes. The music fits soo perfectly it's unreal! I love each and every bit of this flash.
The fact that it combines comedy with a nice plot is just amazing. I am still stunned from the superb animating done here.

I just can't get over how everthing just fits so well. Just a great flash all together. And nothing can change the fact that this is one unique flash.

Much time, work, and effort has been put into this... And it pays off.

[Phone Call]

Not bad

But it's a wee too short. The quality and animation was good, just the comedy is a little bland.
The voices had some mood put into them. As in they almost sounded like a real conversation. Keep it up, you're actually doing quite well as far as animating goes.

Eyelids-pie responds:

Wow thanks! :D I was worried about the voices cuz this is the first thing that i've voiced in! Hohoho.

[Tubby Ep.5]

Your animation is superb. But!

You need to invest time into it. I want to see it become longer. More effort is needed.
Well animated characters, and a few tweening doesn't go too far. You need to actually start working on something time investing. I've seen a few of these a ways back, and they also include the smooth animation, but with a loop that takes the score and lowers it.

I would love to see you take one of them and actually animate them a full flash periode. (1-3 minutes)
It will be worth the score, and the reviews. You could also possibly earn a reward.

What I am trying to say is, "Don't keep them short. Lengthy entertaining flashes beat quality every time."

[Pencilmation #12]

Funny

Although it didn't tickle me as well as the last one did, it had it's moments. I did enjoy it, and you did put a bit of work in it.

I must give credit when credit is due. You've done a great job with all these "Pencilmations" you put on Newgrounds. I did in fact enjoy each and every one of them.

Thanks for making another.

[Dumbass Luigi]

Too much!

I couldn't stop laughing. I love your sprite movies. They are all very funny and entertaining. It was also very addicting. Why couldn't I stop watching this?
Just a very well put together flash that deserves the credit.