Keven11Twenty7's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Legend of Miyamoto]

Truly a work of art.

I watch this flash too much. Only because it drains the very soul from me. It means a lot to me as I am a Nintendo fan. Just seeing all those characters and game scenes brought back a few good memories of back with the older consoles. Those truly were good days back then.
You deserve each medal you've got there. Possibly even more. But thanks, thanks for making this flash. It lifted my day throughout my life. So I finally decided to review it.
Lost of time and hard work must have been put into it. It's very clear to see, and the overall meaning is just as smooth as your aniimating.

I am sure Miyamoto would have loved to see this.

[The Lonely Snowman]

Few Problems

It's not bad, but it needs to be longer. It also needs a replay button as well. The animation wasn't bad, but can be improved a bit. I don't really think the words really match what the snowman is saying. And at the beginning he seems a bit too happy to be lonely. But other than that it's a good nice flash.

[B]

I don't know why...

But I love it! This is where it all started. The clocks and everything. There is not much to this flash, but it means a lot. It almsot makes me tear up.
I love teh Strawberry Clock. Seeing your name still astonishes me today. It is purely amazing.

Too bad your not around. I would love to see more spam from the leader of the clock crew.

[Nathan King Vs the Evil X]

There are a few things...

First of all there is no animated background. Just pictures. Which don't mix to well with animations. Nothing turns out well when you mix qualities. If you can't resist but use pictures at least have the quality of the pictuers good.
You really need to fix that elevator. It disapears after the first time you see notice it. Something went wrong? Not something to worry about, but should be fixed mate.
The voices seemed dull and uninteresting. You need to put more feeling, or get your friends to put more feeling into what they say. You need to feel the motivation in the speech.

There is no syncing of the lips. I noticed that when they talk, there mouths don't move. I feel that not much effort was put into this, but you did in fact try. I sense tweens. Lots of them actually. Tweening is probably what helped you through making this.
The characters didn't seem bad though. They were animeish and that's what most people like. They were a wee poorly drawn, but still look nice.

What my opinion is that most of the flash is about simple little tweens, small jokes, and little drawing.
You can do better. I didn't see much in this, but there is more you can do. More you can accomplish. Keep animating, you sure have an eye for plot. I found the story not too bad actually. It had some funny in there. But basically just improve on your backgrounds and your animating. Don't take the easy way out.

[Super Rambo Bros.]

Not bad

For sprites it's not soo bad. I mean there are a lot of these on Newgrounds, and I would love to see you do somehting more in drawing flash animation.
Although it is actually very good for a sprite movie. Well sprite short.
I would say that you could have lengthened the video a bit more by showing probably the path he took, problems he faced, obsticles he had to get over.
All of that could've been added to enhance the flash. But for a short, it does tell a good story. It gets a little message out, and has the way of entertaining the viewer.

Stick to sprites and keep honing your skills. Make those videos more lengthy and it will surely stick out. You have the comedic genius.

[The Well Behaved Boy]

Very sad

I couldn't help but tear up to this emotional peice of work. The music would probably be the most important part of the flash. Without it the flash's emotions just drain away.

But enough about that. The overall story was good. And everything seemed spot-on. Altough I wasn't able to find the message, I still enjoyed it very much.
The words were a wee quick, but as you warned I read. I didn't have too many problems with it.

It seemed well put together, and the animation was nice and smooth. You've put a lot of hard work in this. Glad you took your time to make this.

[My best and last flash]

Funny

I found this most humorous. It did peeve me off but most of the jokes in there were funny.
And the ending... Well it was suprisingly unexpected. The loading bar was long, and you did make it last by putting in a few obsticles on the way. But it was well worth it for the end joke.
I don't know why I'm saying this, but good job. If you ever change your mind in flash making, please consider doing some more comedy flash. You're actually on the right track there.

Best wishes.

Kieran123 responds:

Thanx this is the first review on here with good criticism