Keven11Twenty7's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Modern Marvels QG 5]

It's not bad

But you do need to improve on a few things. As I would instead of having a quiz game about Modern Marvels, I would base it off something more entertaining. I'm not saying that it's not fun, just that you could do better with a smsll cartoon, or movie quiz.
I never really watch Modern Marvels, so I really had to guess through it. No glitches, nothing wrong. To assure you I went through it fully untill I got everyone right. Just to test it out a bit. Everything seems to work fine, and I congratulate you on that. But those sound effects you have going on there are slightly annoying. I would just use something more like a, "Ding" sound.

Just my opinion, but you should really consider working on different kinds of games, Spread your wings. Reach the other genres of gammings.

bkdude responds:

naah.

i'm studyin' economics, foo.

[The Star Road v.1 (VG-MP)]

Well it's glitchy...

But that's not why the low score. Actaully I found this game really entertaining. Just so you know I've wnet through the whole game and played all the levels. Not a bad game if I do say so myself.

I found the start screen very creative. I love the way the words were set up and it's just a nice neat little screen. It doesn't have much negative spaces and it is mostly filled with what the game is mostly about.
The instructions are simple and easy to understand. Only one page of knowledge needed to conquer this game.

It's very glitchy, but fun as well. I don't understand why these people are saying it's hard. The only hard part is falling through the ground. That's the only handycap in this game.

But it does need improvement. More levels, enemies, goals, it also needs a couple of lives, or checkpoints. I couldn't stand dying the first time I fell and having to restart all the way at the beginning was a pain. But nonthe less it added to the difficutly.

Good job, and I hope one day to see another platforming game from you.

PlatformSource responds:

this was back in 06 , my works are far better than this.

[Sonic scene creator V.4]

Not too bad

I found most of the music pretty enjoyable. But this isn't about the music is it. Well lets see here. I found that there is a lack of items in here. And also the amount of items you are able to use is not much. Adding the amount of each item going to 5-10 would help. Even though most people wouldn't need that much at least they have a choice.
Some items like the boxes that contain items, springs, the check point marker, and some enemies would greatly improve on this game.
I found the backgrounds to be really good. As in there is a good enough amount to choose from. But there should be platforms to match at least most of the backgrounds.
Adding the trash can option would greatly help with this game/gadget. Instead of having them placing the items all over the screen they can simply put them in the little trash bin in turn putting it back into place by itself. Not really needed, but it would help as far as simplifying the game up a bit.

You did do a pretty good job on this. I would love to see another made with some of the advice I gave you. It would probably make a really addicting scene creator. Giving many people minutes of fun. Although scene creators arn't the greatest thing in the world, you can still make one of the best.

Zhuburz responds:

Very good advice!
Thanks for pointing out the problems, I like the trash can idea :3

Oh and Thanks for long and constructive review I i really appreciate it!

[Toxie Radd 2]

A pretty decent game.

I actually had fun with this. The graphics are nice and the whole idea is great. I don't have much to say but I think you've done a great job on this.

Xplored responds:

Thank you!

[Coin Collect]

A simple little game.

What a great game. A simple little objective of collecting the gold coins while avoiding the red. Very fun.

Upgrades: I don't know why people are asking to put in upgrades. In the stage that it is, it's really not suitable to have upgrades. I would say you would need to add a few more things before thinking of such an idea.

Adding "rounds" to the game would really be an improvment. Just throwing an idea out there: I would put in an objective to collect a certain amount of coins to allow players to move on to the next stage. In doing this the game will be less likely to lose players from the lack of excitment.

If you were to add rounds, I see no reason not to add upgrades. Giving yourself the ability of a magnet pull on coins, another heart, speed, size you name it.
I am not going to go all out on this review, but if you would like to know more, just PM.

The background of the game is a little bland. Well it's just a white screen. But really nothing to be concerned about. A new color for every level would be a pretty fun idea.

About the music. I would suggest putting in a simple beat that doesn't get tiresome. Nothing too big. Probably a simple Techno beat would do it.

I think you have a great game on your hands. With a little work and some time you could make this into something unique.
Keep up the great work, and I look forward to a sequal from you.

iAlexTsang responds:

Thanks for all the suggestions!

[Tight Horizons]

I had fun.

It's not a bad game, but it does need improvment.

Really in this type of game, I don't know if adding music would help. Actually yeah, add a tune or two and put yourself a mute button. I do enjoy listening to music while gaming.

The plane wasn't as fluent as I thought it would be, and it is a little hard to control. Nothing too major, but there are improvments needed to be made.

There are a few bugs, and the game doesn't really catch the attention long enough to be an addicting game. It gets a little dull after awhile.

But overall I think you did a good job and I will be looking forward to a sequal if you had in mind.

StaneStane responds:

Yeah, I'd like it to have tunes but out of three people which I asked for help, one went to play Zelda Spirit Tracks, other moved to France and third one become a father, all in the same two weeks when they were supposed to help with music.

[Spider-Man's Adventure 3]

Well, I didn't know what expect at first.

Not the kind of game I would usually play, but I finished it all the way through. All combinations possible. I highly doubt there are any glitches/bugs of any kind. I made sure of it.

Well I wouldn't say the graphics of the game are bad. Acutally it has potential. I see much improvment. As in adding deatail to the background, and improving the quality.

The overall game is based on decisions, choices, and how everything plays out in the end. I've noticed a few battles here and there. Not bad, but super easy. All I would say is that it's just button pressing. But that's not a bad thing, you can improve on this by adding the challenge of the buttons appearing at random, instead of the same area over and over again.

Everything seemed in place and it all came together well. I did enjoy playing it and I look forward to more from you.

Good luck on future submissions.

UltimateFang responds:

Yea :D Read That LGNBAR hahahah!

[Time on NG calculator]

At first I thought it was nothing new.

But then I actually started to fool around a bit.
It's a really great idea, and I found it very interesting. Calculations that add up to the days, months, and years that we have been on Newgrounds.

Very good idea man.

Havegum responds:

soo what you are saying is:
unoriginal idea + NG graphics = kinda good

kthx, I'll keep that in mind :P

[Cave Fall]

There is a bottom.

It's certainly a loop of platforms, but you have to get to the very bottom of the screen to win. THAT is your bottom. A basic game, not too hard, didn't require anything really that special, just your arrow keys and the patteren of the floor below you.

I found my self stuck in mid air. Like I was stuck on the edge of the platform. Nothing too serious though.

The playable character is ok, but could use a little work. Maybe a touch here and there.

Overall the game is pretty decent.

bencleggproductions responds:

Thanks

[Slingshot Master]

Well...

It's not bad. I mean at times it can be addicting, but there are a few problems with this game.

I think one of the major problems is the control. It's slips and slides everywhere. It's not too bad, but it's something that does get annoying.

The whole concept of the game is alright. I mean shooting birds with a slingshot? I really havn't heard of a game that does that. Untill now of course. So I think this is really good in originality.

I would really like to see a Slingsot Master 2. There is much you could add to this game. Like new targets, ammunition, possibly slingshots. There are endless possibilities. And the fact that you can add upgrades would be a nice touch to.

You have done a great job with this game. I will be looking forward to Slingshot Master 2 if you ever decide on actually improving it.

redribera responds:

thank you for your comments!
In the future i'll try to add some stuff, like other objectives, more levels and weapons......Sure! there will be a Slingshot Master 2 game, but this is my first developed game and i think it have the minimum things to publish it. I want to know people acceptance to continue work.

Thank you again for your explanation!