Keven11Twenty7's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tetraform]

Astonishing

One of the most addicting games I have ever played. This game has amazing graphics combined with excelent gameplay.
The controls are not all that easy, but the overall game makes up for it.

The music fits just right within the game and the sound effects are truly magnificent.
I love the game and it has great concept. The little health you collect almost act as upgrades to aid you in your defence of the enemies.
Great work. I found myself lost in the game. I couldn't have asked for a better game.

[Mouse 1.0]

Actually pretty fun.

The graphics were very good. I found most of the game amusing. Although it was still a maze game, I found this one more playable than the others.

You had good music, and the levels each differed in a certain way. But the whole idea of making "another" mouse avoiding game... Well it's just a little played out.

But you've done a great job nontheless.

[the Kill Kar II: Revenge]

Great work Jazza.

You've done yet another astonishing job. I found the game very addicting and I still am in the progress of beating it. The game is quite long, but that's what makes it better than the rest.
Having to actually spend your time to beat it.

Really, great job. I hope to see more.

[Coin Collect]

A simple little game.

What a great game. A simple little objective of collecting the gold coins while avoiding the red. Very fun.

Upgrades: I don't know why people are asking to put in upgrades. In the stage that it is, it's really not suitable to have upgrades. I would say you would need to add a few more things before thinking of such an idea.

Adding "rounds" to the game would really be an improvment. Just throwing an idea out there: I would put in an objective to collect a certain amount of coins to allow players to move on to the next stage. In doing this the game will be less likely to lose players from the lack of excitment.

If you were to add rounds, I see no reason not to add upgrades. Giving yourself the ability of a magnet pull on coins, another heart, speed, size you name it.
I am not going to go all out on this review, but if you would like to know more, just PM.

The background of the game is a little bland. Well it's just a white screen. But really nothing to be concerned about. A new color for every level would be a pretty fun idea.

About the music. I would suggest putting in a simple beat that doesn't get tiresome. Nothing too big. Probably a simple Techno beat would do it.

I think you have a great game on your hands. With a little work and some time you could make this into something unique.
Keep up the great work, and I look forward to a sequal from you.

iAlexTsang responds:

Thanks for all the suggestions!

[Tight Horizons]

I had fun.

It's not a bad game, but it does need improvment.

Really in this type of game, I don't know if adding music would help. Actually yeah, add a tune or two and put yourself a mute button. I do enjoy listening to music while gaming.

The plane wasn't as fluent as I thought it would be, and it is a little hard to control. Nothing too major, but there are improvments needed to be made.

There are a few bugs, and the game doesn't really catch the attention long enough to be an addicting game. It gets a little dull after awhile.

But overall I think you did a good job and I will be looking forward to a sequal if you had in mind.

StaneStane responds:

Yeah, I'd like it to have tunes but out of three people which I asked for help, one went to play Zelda Spirit Tracks, other moved to France and third one become a father, all in the same two weeks when they were supposed to help with music.

[Perpetual Blaze]

Actually quite addicting.

I had fun with this one. After dieing I found myself wanting to play it again and again. But it can get quite boring after awhile.

The mouse seems to be much easier than the rest of the controls, or atleast I think so.

Also the graphics were a nice touch. What would have made this game a lot better would have to be the use of upgrades. I mean you already have items you hit in order to gain special powers, but there should be waves to different levels. After each wave you would get to chose an upgrade followed by the task to destroy a new enemy.

I enjoyed this game very much. I enjoyed playing it, and the music is just perfect for it.
You did a great job and I hope to see more from you.

[Mouse Avoider Maniac]

Not a bad game.

Well it was quite fun. But there are parts here and there that do need some improving.

I've found a few ways to pass through the maze without dieing. And sometimes I could also pass through enemies. It does aid me in beating the game, but I found it anoying when I died and I was thrown back to level 1.

The music is a good fit for the game. While playing it I felt a certain conection to the game and the audio. A very good choice.

Besides that some obsicles/enemies do need to slow down a bit. Not by much, but in doing so you will have an entertaining game on your hands. The levels wern't too hard, but some were a little too easy.

What would improve this game greatly is if you added a selection to the levels you have already played.
Once beating a level you can go to the menu screen and chose that level over and try to accomplish it.
Also adding an option to turn the music off would help.

If you could make it to where when you die you autimatically start the same stage again you're score will increase greatly. It's just a pain to have to start from level one again.

But all-in-all I found it to be very amusing and fun. Continue and grow from this game. I look forward to playing another version of this one day.

[Shooting Range 2]

A pretty fun game

There are a few things to take under consideration like the fact that some people use laptops. But hey, not your problem.

Now about the game. I've played the first level along with 5 others and found it getting quite repetitive. After the first level I felt myself growing weary of shooting targets.
But I had no problem actually hitting them. Everything seems to be in order, but you should consider shortening the time that it takes to get to the next level. Soon after my arm got quite stiff.

I've also noticed that even if you don't shoot anything you still progress to the next level. I would think about setting up a goal of points that needs to be obtained from each stage to pass.
Other than that the graphics were nice. Easy to look at and nothing that gets too annoying.

Adding a pause and mute button was a good touch. Makes it look nice while giving the person the option to stop the game, or music.

It's a good game, but the idea is a little played out. I've seen many of its kind. But good addtion to the shooter genre.

[Spider-Man's Adventure 3]

Well, I didn't know what expect at first.

Not the kind of game I would usually play, but I finished it all the way through. All combinations possible. I highly doubt there are any glitches/bugs of any kind. I made sure of it.

Well I wouldn't say the graphics of the game are bad. Acutally it has potential. I see much improvment. As in adding deatail to the background, and improving the quality.

The overall game is based on decisions, choices, and how everything plays out in the end. I've noticed a few battles here and there. Not bad, but super easy. All I would say is that it's just button pressing. But that's not a bad thing, you can improve on this by adding the challenge of the buttons appearing at random, instead of the same area over and over again.

Everything seemed in place and it all came together well. I did enjoy playing it and I look forward to more from you.

Good luck on future submissions.

UltimateFang responds:

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[Ching Chong Beautiful]

Pretty entertaining game.

I had a couple of hours of fun on this. It's no doubt well made.