Keven11Twenty7's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Kos! Madness]

Not bad

There was some dry humor here and then, but for the whole thing I liked it. It seems to me that you are improving so keep it up.

OnionsXD responds:

Hey thanks! I'm always described as dry humor, or random humor...I guess I still have some work to do...0-0

But thanks for the review!

[Something to Think About]

I inspired you?

Well I'm glad I did. You came out and made a flash and it does look like you put some time into it.

I hope to see more.

DogMan32 responds:

Thanks :)

[TUEA Ep.2-Waluigi]

You've improved

There is some improvements in this flash. Compared to the other one (Which isn't too much of a difference) it was slightly better.

Adding backgrounds would greatly improve on you flashes. You will also need to spend a little more time on animating sprites before attempting another episode.
The overall idea isn't bad, but needs to be improved.

Advice: Before attempting another series of TGEA, you should practice animating. It may seem like a waste of time, but it will help you in the long run and greatly improve your score.
So for now, I don't expect the next episode for at least a couple of weeks. When finally done, and submitted you can ask me yet again for my opinion and I will be more than happy to write a review.

jskecorp responds:

Thanx dude. Well I can't include backgrounds because I don't know how. But I wil practice thanx dude

[How to Breathe Life]

Cool

This wasn't that bad. Actually I would love to see a tutorial if you don't mind. Thanks, now I know how to animate a bird. Maybe someday it will come in handy.

TreasurePlanet responds:

ok
i will start working on a tutorial

[Ultimate Emerald Advent]

Hey not bad.

For a first sprite film there could be a lot of improvment. I feel great potential in your movie. But! I feel as if it was connected to Super Mario Bros Z in ways. I suggest a different idea. One only having to do with either Mario, or Sonic.

Although sprite movies don't really scream talent, when done right they can be the shit. (Good)
Fluent well ploted sprite animations are what get the score. Slideshows isn't that impressive. I would love to see full motion from you. Instead of having them in one position going to the next. Have them going frame-by-frame. It might be a bit of work, but it pays off in the end.

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The beginning music... Well, I would just have to say it's not the best choice. It really doesn't match the flash much. A simple little beat for the title screen is always a good idea.
Also the text should be improved.

It was short, and that's what you should focus on most. Making a longer video would help out dearly.

For right now that's all I can advise. But if you would like to know more, don't hesitate to PM me. I am always glad to help anyone in need of anything.

jskecorp responds:

I know its like super mario bros Z that was my inspiration. I suck at animating thats why its a slide show so next episode will rock because animation will get better thanx.

[A little story]

Aww...

I couldn't help but start to tear up. I was like that at one point. So it kind of means something to me.
Well done, really. The animation was good and had a nice touch to it. The sounds were ok, and the song was well fitting. Although I bet there is something else that would fit this better, but good choice.

Not much to say, but I liked it. Keep on animating, I would love to see more from you.

Cab00se53 responds:

I really appreciate that. I'm glad I was able to touch you, and I'm glad you liked the animation. I will be sure to do more in the near future! Thanks so much :D

[Phone Call]

Not bad

But it's a wee too short. The quality and animation was good, just the comedy is a little bland.
The voices had some mood put into them. As in they almost sounded like a real conversation. Keep it up, you're actually doing quite well as far as animating goes.

Eyelids-pie responds:

Wow thanks! :D I was worried about the voices cuz this is the first thing that i've voiced in! Hohoho.

[My best and last flash]

Funny

I found this most humorous. It did peeve me off but most of the jokes in there were funny.
And the ending... Well it was suprisingly unexpected. The loading bar was long, and you did make it last by putting in a few obsticles on the way. But it was well worth it for the end joke.
I don't know why I'm saying this, but good job. If you ever change your mind in flash making, please consider doing some more comedy flash. You're actually on the right track there.

Best wishes.

Kieran123 responds:

Thanx this is the first review on here with good criticism

[this is a duck]

*Sigh*

I doubt you will take my advice, but I must give it anyway.

It's a slide show that has a music of some sort to it. The slideshow is about ducks, and the point is...

Exactly,... Well, it's not a "too" bad flash. I've actually seen better. But it doesn't seem to have much effort put into it. A loop of pictures and audio isn't all that amazing.
But I am sure you can reach higher than this. I believe that you can make some sort of decent flash. Even if it's a slideshow with music, as long as you tried on it I won't judge harshly.

I did in fact laugh, or should I say chuckle a wee bit on the Donald duck pic. I guess it just came as a suprise.
But yeah, I know you can do better than this. And I know that you have potential.
Try not to stick with slide shows ok. But if you have to, then make it the best slide show you can.

lokosteve responds:

wow o.o you are a good person<3

[Gayshit.swf]

That was too much.

I couldn't stop laughing. My favorite part would have to be when he was checking the list.

Other than that it was a great flash. It has a reasonable about of jokes, and the overall animation was pretty good. Everything seemed to tie in well.
A pretty short flash but still had its moments.

Merry Christmass to you to.

Therman responds:

Thank you for your kind words. It really helps. :D
It is indeed very short but I only had a few days to make it in, and I also don't have that much experience with flash. But hopefully I will make more and better movies in 2010.