Keven11Twenty7's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Meric&ChilcoRidetheBus.01]

Well...

It's good for a first. But... It's not in sync. What you should focus on is not haveing the syncing down yet, but actually haveing some more frames. I mean it's just picture by picture with some voices. Work on having them move. Everything else like th background (Bus) was pretty good. The characters were also drawn pretty well. The problem is, is that you need to put some more time and effort in this.

Overall I think it's ok for a first. But spend more time with your flash. Get the syncing down, maybe put mood in the voices. Make it seem like the are really talking to each other. LIke an acutal conversation. (I'm not saying you don't have that down.)

Long review short, take time in your submissions.

garythetramp responds:

Yeah, I had issues syncing the sound. Didn't know how to do it yet. I exported it with the audio waaay out of sync for it to come out slightly in sync...but I believe i've figured it out and fixed it in the second episode.
movement wise, i was doing more of a style thing, like Tom Goes to the Mayor or The Professor Brothers, but I see what you're saying. I think slowly but surly i'll make them move more and more. Thanks for the advice!

[On The Moon (episode 16)]

Love the series Weebl.

This and Cat Face would have to be my favorite series on Newgrounds. Keep it up man.

[Waiting for the Bus!]

Nice

This flash was actually pretty fun to watch. You kept me in throughout the whole flash. You did a great job. You deserve this 10.

[LARRY episode 1]

Perfect

I found this animation to be funny and very entertaining. You did a great job Jazza. I can't wait to see your future submissions.

[Get on My Horse]

Another great loop.

You never fail to impress me with you little flash animated songs. Just as addictive as the rest.

[Linx black and white]

Not bad

It could use some improvment here and there, but everything seems to be good. Just spend a little more time on it, probably give it a lot of effort and I am sure it will turn out even better.

linxman90 responds:

thnx

[Dr. Mario with Lyrics]

Great flash

The song is really addicting. Love the lyrics.

[Bros before Hoes]

I don't see the reason to blam.

I mean for a first flash submission you have to take in the fact that it will be bad, but this flash isn't quite as bad as I thought it would be. Wait, let me take that back. It's even better than I thought it would be.

For a first it's really impressive. Good luck on future submissions.

kenshiIce responds:

Thanks mate :) Means a lot :D

[The hell are my legs 3]

Wasn't too bad

It just needs a little improvment here and there. I am sure this could actually become something on Newgrounds. You just need to put a little more effort into it.

Like take the spaceship for example you could start by cutting out the whole thing instead of leaving bits and pieces floating around.

Tramptech responds:

Those bits are space dust

[Sun Creem]

Hey

It's not so bad. At least not as bad as I thought it would be. It was an ok flash. It still needs a little work here and there but you've got the main idea.

I am sure in no time you will be making superb flash. Keep up the hard work.

falling responds:

Well what a positive outlook for the future :D

Thanks a lot ;)